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Subconcious story

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  I remember when cheese ate mail boxes. HA! Oh, those where the jolly grand old days, when the nargles ran free and sitcoms where funny. Ooooooh yes, that's funny, a fly marrying a bumble bee. Hippo Are Smell. I am your neighbor. Batman could own you even if he were middle class and Robin was a girl named Darcy. I like Johnny's boots ow my hand. I do not wish to work under pressure. drawing is an amusing waste of time, until we all just get old and die. Electricute my thoughts and put my thoughts on standby. I have no idea what the taco I'm saying anymore. holy mo fracker look at my eyeballs tire. I do not wish to be incarcerated, Padded rooms dont look bouncy. Oowwwww carpet cleaner mo fracker. My hand is killing me. Save me Batman! Ariel, where are you!? swim for your life little seagull fish. I hope none of my brain thoughts should make sense The Used. And the McCracken  ate them all, the end.
  Oh? No not you of the McCracken? Ohohoho. Once a singing man, he barfed up his soul, now by aid of flippers and the pale moonlight, he tips boats. My hand is in mass amounts of pain. It is full of ow and grapejuice. grammar is impossible at the speed of light.
This is what my teacher willed me to do in English class today. Apparently this form of writing is called 'modern' or 'free falling' and the idea is not to think about what you're writing AT ALL. That way, you get to see what the person's subconsious is thinking.
So, ultimately, this is a ten minute look into my brain, based around the two words ' I remember'
I can see snippits of Bernard and Gunther in there, but that's because I might be crazy.
The grammar is exactly the same as when I first wrote it, and so is the spelling. Thus why it is so terrible. I decided not to tamper with it, or it might make less sense XD
Now I have to write a poem about it. Oh dear.
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iMegZy's avatar
wow... i have realised the MY brain is alot more messed up and random than i thought!