I felt that this introduction best represented Benji and Percy as characters, their friendship, and the overall sort of tone of the story better than how I initially wrote it.
But yeah, part one of For Science: The Musical- I mean novel.
it should be a musical.
So far all the places in the story are actual places. I have not made up a world, just gone back in my fictitious time machine and dicked around with a few major cities and events.
Let me know what you think, what I should change, if I should post the next part, whatever. Even if you thought it was boring or as pleasant as eating tar, I would like to know so I can revise accordingly.
If you read this, I'm sure staying a second more to write a bit in the guest book won't kill you, right?